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Title: Need some input please.
Post by: Aras on November 03, 2009, 10:18:50 AM
I am slowly working on a design for a SW:TOR guild that I may or may not try to start.  My lack of RP knowledge keeps me from going full-tilt with it.  However, it is a template that I have modified to suit my needs.

Can anyone with the time take a few clicks and tell me what you think?

http://www.legacyofthefallen.com/index/ (http://www.legacyofthefallen.com/index/)

Thank you.
Title: Re: Need some input please.
Post by: Ravenns on November 03, 2009, 04:43:10 PM
Seems to me that you're mixing up your villians and heroes.

You want to have a guild for your favorite class (Jedi Knights) who are the heroes, but your guild theme, at least as indicated by the name of your guild, is Legacy of the Fallen. 

That name suggests the villians, doesn't it?

Anakin Skywalker started out as a Jedi (hero), fell and became the villian.

I'm sure you can work up some kind of redemption theme for your guild if you think about it.  (Even Darth Vadar enjoyed redemption at the end of the series...)

Hope this helps.

Title: Re: Need some input please.
Post by: Aras on November 03, 2009, 08:21:21 PM
Quote from: Ravenns on November 03, 2009, 04:43:10 PM
Seems to me that you're mixing up your villians and heroes.

You want to have a guild for your favorite class (Jedi Knights) who are the heroes, but your guild theme, at least as indicated by the name of your guild, is Legacy of the Fallen. 

That name suggests the villians, doesn't it?

Anakin Skywalker started out as a Jedi (hero), fell and became the villian.

I'm sure you can work up some kind of redemption theme for your guild if you think about it.  (Even Darth Vadar enjoyed redemption at the end of the series...)

Hope this helps.



By "Fallen" we mean those who have given their lives to try to restore the Republic and peace to the galaxy.  We are their legacy and will fight to hopefully accomplish what they set out to do.
Title: Re: Need some input please.
Post by: Jezerai on November 04, 2009, 09:55:25 PM
It looks pretty slick!  I like the background through the transparent home page.  Only thing, though, is that I had trouble reading the name.  Any way to make it stand out a bit more?

On the name, I see what you mean but it is kind of open to misinterpretation.  How about Legacy of Fallen Heroes?